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I use to think I was invincible,
Til I was moments away from losing everything,
There's nothing worse than being alone,
My voice gets louder so I don't here the phone,
Not that anyone would want to talk to me, [To me!]

Maybe one day, I'll be able to say,
that I'm not alone,
As impossible as that even sounds,
Cause my whole world is drowning, in every lie I speak,
I swear to God my lies are just, to keep me warm at night,
They give me a false hope in a light,
But anything is better than being alone,

So if you hear me, If you see me,
You have to let me know, OH!
That there's something out there for me!
Before I let this Go, OH!
Look into these eye's they've lost there soul! OH!
I never thought it be this easy to lose hope in myself,

I spend my days with loneliness,
And, My nights with tragedy!,
When will I feel warm?
Why is the coldness the only thing that stays with me?
I hate feeling, feeling so cold!

Can you tell me,
Educate me,
with meaning of letting go,
Cause I feel that's the only way to go,
Cause I feel that I'll never know,
Life lessons never apply to rich people, only poor!
How unfortunate we are, I'll never know the feeling of love,
Because the world has tainted the meaning of it,

We are all so fake, yeah!
We are all gonna Die, [when the time comes]
and when that happens we slowly are forgotten,
are you scared of being forgotten,
I've been forgotten and I haven't even left yet...
©2009-2010 ~Melancholy-the-Boy
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This is just a song i wrote about, the true fear of death, which is being forgotten as if you never existed, it doesn't happen right away but if your not famous/ or "important" your eventually going to be forgotten about which is so tragic

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:iconmelancholy-the-boy:
aww baby your reading this rite now, but i love yew!!!!

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Yet again you amaze me with your awesomeness! But i rather think i goes unappreciated here on da. there's this website called Webook, specifically designed for writers like yourself! you could even get your stuff published on there if your lucky o3o.

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OMG really thats awesome, and thanks so much cutie.
:D I'll def go check it out!!!
I appreciate everything you say about my work...

Honestly lol this took me 10min to write, you know how theres a post text button when you upload new art,
I just open up the text bar and start typing without even thinking and than i read it over and it always makes sense...its so weird, like 99% of my writing is done freestyle!
But i was witing a book a couple years ago, I really want to write a book soooo badly think I'm gonna pick it back up. :D

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Yup, yup and your welcome! :3
Awwww~
Wew, i know what you mean, though i probably can't do it as easily as you can. oh, i was writing a book to, until it got to the point where i didn't feel like it any longer. I might start it up again, rewrite a few chapters.

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yeah :D you should!!!

My book got to confusing, it was called destiny dimensions,
It was about these chose people that could travel into any dimension and they had to kill all the monsters and rulers of the other dimensions before they found earths dimension and destroyed all life, i was gonna end the book with the following line....




"As the dark white light sucks up the ruler, throwing him into a universe he has never seen, yet has always knew existed, Looking down from space he notices a big blue ball, The ruler grins..."

it went something like that, which basically means the world is totally screwed! lol

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oh lol, your's sounds pretty interesting. Mines a little predictable, but i wrote it like a year ago... but my writing skills haven't improved. .__. It's about this girl who was born on earth, but really belongs in this other world. er, and people like her were special cause they were rare and really powerful and stuff like that. XD It was called Taint.

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:iconmelancholy-the-boy:
haha thats cool sounds like elfen lied :D

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elfen lied?

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its an amzing anime :D
surprised you've never heard of it!

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